very nice
I could go on for a while about the positive stuff..but that would be a long review.
so here are a few points i found.
It seems really basic. not terribly bad, just seems like it should come in with more power when it gets out of that filter break thingy at about 1:00.
I think if you just put more work into this, maybe make it longer or something, it could be pretty good.
right now though it sounds like more of a video game song than something to just listen to.
(all just my thoughts.. this is good stuff though dude)